Friday, July 15, 2011

Progress - July 15, 2011

Title: Blade and Bone
Words Total: 4900
Words Today: 694
Reason for stopping: The first draft is done. It's a very drafty first draft but it's done.

Wordage I liked: "Tell me why I shouldn't destroy every bone in your hands. Why I shouldn't slit your wrists and leave you to bleed out on the floor."

His gaze traveled her robe-covered body. "You could do that before I stopped you?"

She pulled the bone comb from her hair, burying its point in the table and grabbed his hand again before he could react. His hands grew cold beneath hers.

Things to discover: What my Alpha reader thinks of it.

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